I have observed in my quest of writing the best poetry, that I love drawing parallels to Nature. It is just too exciting and fulfilling. The dimensions involved are simply beautiful.
The Silent Serpent
It is the world that you are a part of
It is the world that you are a part of
It is your existence that you seem to be a tiny little shard of
You deny
You imply defiance
Your faith proves you wrong
Your belief proves every one wrong
You are wrong
In believing that you are on the right way
With the silence of your dreams
You deny
You imply defiance
Your faith proves you wrong
Your belief proves every one wrong
You are wrong
In believing that you are on the right way
With the silence of your dreams
And the fickleness of your desires
You lose.
You lose.
Silence is no more an answer
Shout
Shout
Keep the sanity to your self
Keep the silence to your self too
In danger, swiftly
Evolve into a silent serpent
Keep the silence to your self too
In danger, swiftly
Evolve into a silent serpent
Hissing into the realms of reality
With fangs so bare, so close to me
Am I afraid?
I wish I was.
With fangs so bare, so close to me
Am I afraid?
I wish I was.
I have lost the feeling, I suppose.
Tell your mind to speak to me
Tell your soul to surround me
Tell your body to embrace me
Infinitely
Tell your soul to surround me
Tell your body to embrace me
Infinitely
Because
The serpent will kill me.
(1st April, 2011)
The serpent will kill me.
(1st April, 2011)
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ReplyDeleteWe have become anesthetized for so many reasons that our senses have become numb. This poem caused me to feel a crying out for warning or rescue. It moved me, and I loved it!
ReplyDeleteI am glad that it did!
ReplyDeleteThe mere knowing of the fact that we have lost feeling, is quite worrisome. And it takes too many dimensions now.
A constant reminder is needed.
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